I did not receive any feedback from my second pitch, so I did some self-criticism again. I noticed that I lacked energy, so I decided to do this pitch earlier in the morning. Also, I pictured myself in an actual setting, rather than just the recording device, so I "faked" eye contact around the room.
Hey Berteau,
ReplyDeleteYou really have a great idea here and you delivered your pitch for it very well. I think it was very smart that you did this in the morning in order to capture all your energy into this pitch. I did the same thing for mine because I thought I lacked enthusiasm at night and I also wanted to get good natural lighting before doing it. Also, you really made it seem like you were talking to an actual audience so nice job with that as well!